Saturday, August 28th, 2010 at
11:39 am
He slithers through the rotted door
I hold my breath as if I’m gone
His boots damp from the downpour
The devil and him are so fond
He removes his ragged hat and smiles
I dream I am away for miles
He sees me in the closet door
Were I was left the day before
My blood circles around the drain
The water needles upon my skin
I wonder if God sees this pain
No warmth no merriment no kin
Waiting on his fist is my face
I can no longer live in this wretched place
Crawling away from the devil’s hand
His boots now damp with my blood
He leaves still with his wicked smile
I break out of my prison door
This place engulfed by all that is vile
I don’t look back, dismay in my core
He comes home to shattered glass
From the night of my escape
I scream and cry free at last
My thoughts still he does rape…
What Do You Think?
Wednesday, August 25th, 2010 at
11:38 am
He slithers through the rotted door
I hold my breath as if I’m gone
His boots damp from the downpour
The devil and him are so fond
He removes his ragged hat and smiles
I dream I am away for miles
He sees me in the closet door
Were I was left the day before
My blood circles around the drain
The water needles upon my skin
I wonder if God sees this pain
No warmth no merriment no kin
Waiting on his fist is my face
I can no longer live in this wretched place
Crawling away from the devil’s hand
His boots now damp with my blood
He leaves still with his wicked smile
I break out of my prison door
This place engulfed by all that is vile
I don’t look back, dismay in my core
He comes home to shattered glass
From the night of my escape
I scream and cry free at last
My thoughts still he does rape…
Haha Did You Run Out of Space? =) Thank You Very Much For Your Analysis I Took a little more time on this Poem. I Tryed to Mix Up my Rhyme Scheme a bit too just experimenting =)
Also I Think I’m Addicted to the Rhymes because I am a Musician haha…
